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Cool zombie story from a guy @ AR15.com

Discussion in 'Guns & Hunting' started by Zombie Runner, Jan 5, 2011.

  1. Jan 5, 2011 at 1:24 PM
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    Zombie Runner

    Zombie Runner [OP] Are these black helicopters for me?

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  2. Jan 6, 2011 at 5:10 PM
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    Lost_Humanity

    Lost_Humanity Bad decisions make great stories.

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    This guy needs an editor. I read the first chapter and found at least 5 misspellings and countless grammatical mistakes.

    Nothing turns me away from a published story faster.
     
  3. Jan 7, 2011 at 5:44 AM
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    Zombie Runner [OP] Are these black helicopters for me?

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    lol well im pretty bad at grammar so it didnt bother me too much
     
  4. Jan 16, 2011 at 9:53 AM
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    Just enough, and never enough
    Thanks for sharing bro. I read all of it and I want moar!
     
  5. Jan 16, 2011 at 1:13 PM
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    that was pretty good
     
  6. Jan 18, 2011 at 5:47 AM
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    Zombie Runner [OP] Are these black helicopters for me?

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    Yea It defiently left me wanting to read more!

    a zombie story writen by an actual gun enthusiast :infantry:
     
  7. Jan 18, 2011 at 5:53 AM
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    not too bad tho. I enjoyed it and eagerly await more
     
  8. Feb 10, 2011 at 1:46 PM
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    Just enough, and never enough
    Just in case anyone wants to know, chapter 1 from part two is up now.
     
  9. Feb 11, 2011 at 5:38 AM
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    Zombie Runner [OP] Are these black helicopters for me?

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    sweet! im gonna catch up on it today
     
  10. Feb 11, 2011 at 6:10 AM
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    just read the last entry...SHIT I want to read MORE!!!!
     
  11. Feb 17, 2011 at 1:27 PM
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    makes me want to get out my BOB and re-organize it lol
     
  12. Feb 17, 2011 at 2:17 PM
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    all my stuff is just randomly thrown in the bottom of my closet. I need to get it all together and keep it in my damn bag.
     
  13. Feb 17, 2011 at 2:51 PM
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    I was the same way i just went out and got a sterlite container and crammed everything in there.worst case i through the box in the back of the taco and head for the hills. if i gotta ditch that ill have my kelty pack loaded and ready to go lol
     
  14. Feb 22, 2011 at 11:34 AM
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    just read a couple paragraphs and I couldn't go on. Yes, misspellings and grammar errors, but the changing tenses were what really killed me. I 'do' A, B and C then I 'did' D, E and F. I also expected to read about a prepared, self-sufficient individual and in the first couple minutes I find he's not carrying a weapon or a flashlight, his phone isn't charged and he's unemployed, living in his parents' basement. I hope the zombies eat his effing brain.
     
  15. Feb 22, 2011 at 1:55 PM
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    ^ wow talk about a negative nancy :laugh:
     
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    Really??? It was not that bad. Who really gives a fuck about changing tenses. You also didnt like it because of the fact that he was at a job interview, lived at home and his phone died? Has your phone ever died? Have you ever been job-less? He was a ex-Marine who is trying to adapt into a civi life style. he prolly lives with his parents cause he didnt own a home because the military usually gives him all that. he was trying to get a job aanyway. And he did have a weapon. it was in his car. a glock if i remember right. When you write a flaw less story about a zombie attack where the main character is un-realistically prepared and everything goes right, post it on here and let me know ill read it;)
     
  17. Feb 22, 2011 at 3:42 PM
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    x2
     
  18. Feb 23, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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    I do - an educated reader trying to suspend disbelief. The errors pull me right out of the story, which may have been entertaining otherwise. I admit I was pretty harsh in my judgment, but I thought this was a place where we discussed things - good or bad. There's no need to be offended if one guy doesn't like a story that you like.
     
  19. Feb 23, 2011 at 12:32 PM
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    I enjoyed it because it was a zombie story written by an actual gun enthusiast and knows about the topic rather than just some guy that watched a zombie flick once and thinks he's an expert.
     
  20. Feb 23, 2011 at 3:25 PM
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    soory if i came off as a dick it just seemed like you only tried to see the negative....besides all this lybia and egypt shit pisses me off....but thats all for a different thred;)
     
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